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Lord of the Flies Character Analysis Essay

 Basic Directions

 

Purpose:   To discuss the function of one of the major characters of Lord of the Flies and explain how that function reveals a theme/meaning of Golding's novel.

Choose from:  Ralph, Jack, Piggy, Simon, or Roger

Audience:  Someone who has read the novel.  (Therefore, no book reports/plot summaries!)

Form:  An essay of 4-7 paragraphs in MLA format or an oral presentation of 3-5 mins..

Portion of Assignment
Due Date
Character and basic function or meaning chosen
 Monday, March 1
Rough Draft completed
 Wednesday, March 10
Final Draft completed
 Tuesday, March 16

Hints To Do Well:
  • Function:  By this we mean the important of the character in the novel.  This may partly require you to describe personality, but think more in terms of what the character brings to the novel. How would the novel be different (what would it lose) if the character did not appear?
  • Theme:  This is the message or lesson of the novel.  There are many possible themes, depending on which character and function you choose.  We'll talk more about this in class.
  • MLA format:  This means that the paper (as a final draft) will be typed, double-spaced, have proper margins and be properly labeled, etc.  See Submitting Papers (above) for full directions.
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  • Think about the outlines and notes we've taken in class so far.  You may find ideas from the character's name, from symbolic objects attached to the character, from things the character says, etc.  You may also want to think about id, ego, and superego for ideas.
  • Quote the novel.  The best papers will always prove their points about the character by using the novel's words in quotation marks and citing page numbers in parentheses ().
  • Consider how the novel's theme is important or true/false.  This might be a good discussion for a concluding paragraph.
 

 Chisnell's Sample Paper

 

My Character:  Percival Wemys Madison (Ch. 5)

He's not a major character, but I'm choosing him because even small characters are important!  Here I will list a few observations about him from the book and my thinking on them.  This will help me outline a paper.

What I Notice
What I Think It Might Mean
He's a littlun.  Ralph is reminded of the littliun of the "mulberry-colored birthmark" who vanished when the moutain burned.
Both boys were scared of a beast.  Nobody talks about the birthmark boy, and nobody wants to talk about Percy.  They are both important but the boys don't want to think of how they're important.
"There had been no further numberings of the littluns."  Ralph knows some are missing.
Again, nobody wants to know that they're missing, so they purposelessly don't try to keep track of them.
Speaks his name, address, but can't remember phone numbers.  Cries with littluns.
Symbolism: He was trained by adults to do this in times of being lost or in danger, but this link to the past--to society and family--is lost.  This is true for all of the littluns, because they all cry.
"Beast comes out of the sea."
Percy reminds them that the beast can still exist.  By saying this he turns their Piggy-scientific brains back into fear.
"Lying in the long grass, was living through circumstances in which the incantation of his address was powerless to help."
Like above, his parents could never have expected that this would happen, that he would lose his ability to stop his fear.

 
So now what?
 
From these ideas, I think Percy is a symbolic character.  He represents the fear that no one wants to talk about.  Since he is a littlun, he knows nothing about leadership, rules, hunting, survival, etc. like the other boys.  All he has is fear.  The older boys don't want to talk about this (or the littluns), but they can't help but notice that the fear is real--littluns are vanishing.
 
I also think that the fear is produced from losing society. And whatever is left (fear) isn't made up; it's real, because people are missing/dying.  Worst of all, most people don't want to admit it.  People are ignored, their names are not important, and what happens to them is not important. 
 
I also think that since Ralph is the leader of this society, Golding is also saying that society does not care about individuals who are lost or afraid.
 
 
Thesis
  • In Golding's Lord of the Flies, Percival Wemys Madison represents the fear no one wants to talk about, showing that civilization is in denial about its own fears.
Now I have to start outlining what the essay will look like....
 

 Doing a Presentation?

Here are a few tips:

  • Work from an outline, not a script.
  • Practice your presentation before you present!
  • Create a visual aid or two to help emphasize your point!
  • Practice your presentation!
  • Powerpoint and such are good, but you are presenter; have visual aids back you up, not replace you!
  • Practice!
  • Follow all of the requirements and recommendations (quotes, support, etc.) for the essay.
  • Save time for questions and answers.
  • Practice your presentation!
  • Read Presentations for more hints!
  • Practice before you present!